Action beat with dynamic framing
โThat's not what I was told.โ
A stop-motion inspired tale about childhood dreams taking flight.
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Nine-year-old Hana folds paper planes and launches them from her apartment balcony, each one carrying a wish. When one of them comes back with a reply written in a handwriting she doesn't recognize, she follows the trail to the rooftop of a neighboring building โ and meets an elderly man who once dreamed of building real aircraft. Together, they attempt to build something that actually flies.
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Scene 1 of 4 โ โOpening Nightโ ยท Interior/Exterior ยท Hopeful ยท Night
Action beat with dynamic framing
Pulls out a document
โThat's not what I was told.โ
Final reveal of the scene
Pulls out a document
Tension building through negative space
Turns to face the camera
6 of 20 frames
Action beat with dynamic framing
โThat's not what I was told.โ
Final reveal of the scene
Tension building through negative space
Visual Style
Cinematic, high contrast
Color Palette
Dark with warm accents
Mood
Atmospheric tension
References
Reference film 1, Reference film 2
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